Moonthread. This was a powerful story. This stopped me dead in my tracks. It read like a poem. and by no means do I mean that as a criticism
Leo Tolstoy says something about being stopped in his tracks, while reading, and asking "Now why did the poet do that?" This happens all the time. It's part of the code-breaking. When a word or phrase appears that's arresting, it does two things: it challenges my perceptions of seeing/hearing/feeling, and it moves me into new territory. By this I mean an altered state of awareness that's akin to an extended daydream, where all my senses conspire to provide fertile and syntactically engaging words or lines. It happens rarely, but when I'm there I tend to make the most of it, for days sometimes.
I do believe that you are a powerful thinker and that you have you mad skills. And because of this I wish for some sort of correspondence with you. I am going to kick it off by subscibring in the hopes you do the same. This will keep me accountable and motivated to leave comments such as this on your subsequent and previous posts. I imagine our bonded will power with these exercises will bear much fruit. Moonthread; do keep me on your long distance radar. in the joy of eternal collaboration from shore.
Moonthread. This was a powerful story. This stopped me dead in my tracks. It read like a poem. and by no means do I mean that as a criticism
Leo Tolstoy says something about being stopped in his tracks, while reading, and asking "Now why did the poet do that?" This happens all the time. It's part of the code-breaking. When a word or phrase appears that's arresting, it does two things: it challenges my perceptions of seeing/hearing/feeling, and it moves me into new territory. By this I mean an altered state of awareness that's akin to an extended daydream, where all my senses conspire to provide fertile and syntactically engaging words or lines. It happens rarely, but when I'm there I tend to make the most of it, for days sometimes.
I do believe that you are a powerful thinker and that you have you mad skills. And because of this I wish for some sort of correspondence with you. I am going to kick it off by subscibring in the hopes you do the same. This will keep me accountable and motivated to leave comments such as this on your subsequent and previous posts. I imagine our bonded will power with these exercises will bear much fruit. Moonthread; do keep me on your long distance radar. in the joy of eternal collaboration from shore.
Sincerely, Cc
Hey CC! Thank you so much for the kind words above. This is absolutely the kind of reaction I dream to inspire....
Also, it was very fun to write a fight scene! haha