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Mkwawa shujaa's avatar

Loving the slow build, there’s so much heart in Nala and Gran’s bond, and the world feels rich with magic and memory. I can't wait to see what's up with the tents.

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nikka's avatar

I could definitely feel Nala’s impatience at the beginning! The way you wrote the counting/breathing definitely made me slow down when reading and made me feel *in* the story.

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