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Stephen Thomas's avatar

Really starting to enjoy this world, even though I kind of resisted being pulled into it. It's like the demonisation of orcs is being softened and undone, particularly with female, sympathetic characters... Probably hooked now!

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I could definitely feel Nala’s impatience at the beginning! The way you wrote the counting/breathing definitely made me slow down when reading and made me feel *in* the story.

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