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Mkwawa shujaa's avatar

Loving the slow build, there’s so much heart in Nala and Gran’s bond, and the world feels rich with magic and memory. I can't wait to see what's up with the tents.

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Anthony Lee Phillips's avatar

I’m glad you feel that way, Mkwawa! And thank you for reading.

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nikka's avatar

I could definitely feel Nala’s impatience at the beginning! The way you wrote the counting/breathing definitely made me slow down when reading and made me feel *in* the story.

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Anthony Lee Phillips's avatar

Ahhhh that makes me so happy! ^.^

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Onika Howdyn's avatar

Patience pays... a hard lesson to accept when you're young 😊

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Anthony Lee Phillips's avatar

This is a slow lesson for Nala... as it was a slow lesson for me!

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Taylor's avatar

Loveedddd the imagery in this. Loved how you played with light all the way through the chapter!

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Anthony Lee Phillips's avatar

^.^

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Anthony Lee Phillips's avatar

I appreciate you taking the time to read it, E!

Hopefully it was a good introduction to Nala!

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