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Rachel McDonald's avatar

This is brilliant. So engrossing! Thank you for writing it.

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Anthony Lee Phillips's avatar

Ahhhh thank you Rachel! I appreciate you reading it.

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Taylor's avatar

I am loving the dynamic between Nala and Gran. The tension is building and it is FELT, through this chapter!

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Alexis's avatar

Every time I read it, it gets more thorough and more detailed. I can see the entire scene in my mind's eye. And great addition of alliterations!

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Angela Marrant's avatar

Love it 😀

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