I appreciate how you’re grounding the fantasy world in small, human moments like the the awkward guilt Nala feels seeing the beggar, Grish’s generosity, the way curiosity pulls her toward the mapwitch and Paka. You feel her world expanding with each scene. The moment where her hearing sharpens, that little mmm, is such a clever hint that her magic is waking up. It’s subtle, but it gives you chills if you’re paying attention 🫶💖✨
I appreciate how you’re grounding the fantasy world in small, human moments like the the awkward guilt Nala feels seeing the beggar, Grish’s generosity, the way curiosity pulls her toward the mapwitch and Paka. You feel her world expanding with each scene. The moment where her hearing sharpens, that little mmm, is such a clever hint that her magic is waking up. It’s subtle, but it gives you chills if you’re paying attention 🫶💖✨
I really love how you wove the chaotic high energy scenes together. Very artfully done!
Thanks E! The "Warring Weavers" thread will come back in a later book, too...
Tapestries are a big deal for many Orcish Tribes, and that's for a good reason too!